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exterminate the saibamen

Post by Shargon on Thu Nov 11, 2010 11:00 pm

as cojin woke up he went into the sky and went to a city but when he went everyone at the city were running away and buildings were being destroyed by something as e walked trying to find what was going on he bumped into one of the people that were running cojin said "sorry but can you tell me whats going on?" the man then said "these strange monsters are attacking the city they killed nearly everyone and there are..." as soon as he was about to say how many a energy wave hit and killed the man cojin then saw what the monsters were saibamen there was a blue one a red one a green one a yellow one a pink one and a giant black one cojin then said "the saiba force? I didnt know you were still alive heh the most powerful saibamen" the yellow one went at full force at cojin trying to hit him with a rush of punches and kicks cojin dodged all of there hits very easy he then jumped in the air backwards he then pulled his sword out he then jumped forwards at the yellow saibamen and sliced it in half with the sword he then sliced it a bunch more times and as soon as the cuts were made and the slices were apart he charged a energy wave and blasted it at the parts destroying them yellow saibamen blood on the ground cojin then said "yellow saibamen most weak and slow mostly used on weak life forms but you saibamen forgot...im not a weak life form" the blue saibamen then went super fast at cojin firing many energy blasts at him which were all cut in half and destroyed by the sword he had he then put it back then came from right behind the saibamen and whispered "ill kill you" he then grabbed the saibamens arm threw it in the air then formed a small death giver and threw it at the saibamen destroying it he then said "blue most skilled in ki for the normal ones only one with a better amount of ki then that is the black saibamen" the pink one then went insanely fast at cojin and did a insane amount of punches and kicks to him all were dodged but the last one which was a a punch cojin grabbed its arm pulled his sword out and cut it's arm off he then grabbed its other arm went behind it then stabbed its head with the sword and left it in there red then went at insanely high speed and force at cojin it's head then open's it then fires acid out of it cojin then dodged it then as soon as red was nearly at cojin he pulled the sword out of pink's head then stabbed a hole though reds chest killing it the last one was black cojin then said "red and pink both are partners kill one and one will get mad red and pink are both about speed and power" black then chucked giant energy balls at cojin all of which were cut in half and blew up by cojin's sword he then came from behind it and stabbed a hole though its chest then grabbed the back of its head then stabbed it killing it and black saibamen blood coming out he then created graves for each as they might of been evil but they were still helpers of his race each having the name and power of that saibamen
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Re: exterminate the saibamen

Post by Cleric on Thu Nov 11, 2010 11:06 pm

Good job! This is much better than the first topic you made.
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