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broly and the fallen hero (Earth)

Post by XTheTerrorOfDeath on Wed Nov 24, 2010 10:27 pm

I was flying throu the mountians after traning and doing an old ladies lawn for her when i spotted a parade and celebration for a man who they were calling a hero. So i flew down to the town called Hercule City. After i landed i walked up and squezed in the crowd. i asked the man next to me who the guy was on the platform in the center of the parade that they were calling hero. He said *Thats Hercule there throwing a parade for him celebrating that he single handedle beat the monster Cell*. Then the man said * I cant believe u dont know the strongest man in the world he is the hero of the world you need to catch up on the news buddy*. So then i chuckled and said to myself * If hes the strongest man in this world this should be a good fight *. So i jumped on the platform and attemted to hit him but he dodged it and looked scared so i laughed and hit him with a ki blast. After a while of him not getting up i walked over there and said * You cant fool me hero*. So picked him up by the collar of his shirt and looked at him i couldnt believe it he was out cold. So i threw him on the platform smirked and flew away.
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Re: broly and the fallen hero (Earth)

Post by Cleric on Thu Nov 25, 2010 11:44 pm

Fix this like I told you on the other quest, please. And do keep in mind, that you cannot do quest until your bio is approved anyways.
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