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Post by Leroy on Sun Feb 06, 2011 2:48 pm

Leroy heard that there were raiders going around every town and taking their children to train for their 'army'. Leroy was very disappionted when he heard this." How can someone do this at a time like this?" Leroy thought. He then heard footsteps nearby. He turned to his right and saw one of the raiders. "Hey look someone wants to act tough!", he yelled. "Good eye, Greth. Let's stop him", another had said while revealing himself from a shadow. Then four more of them had appeared and surrounded Leroy.

"I'm gonna stop you no matter what", Leroy said. Then, all of them attacked at once. Leroy dodged all of their attacks except on hard punch that came form the knuckles of Greth. Leroy then threw a ki blast at Greth. Greth then fell on the floor. Leroy then began charging a galactic beam he had learned before. Then, before he can fire the beam blew up in his hands. "Haha! What a loser he can't even fire an attack!", one of them had said.

Leroy then got enraged and fired a piercing bullet at the one that made fun of him right thruogh his heart. Then, the raider had died. "One down, five more to go", Leroy thought to himself. After this, they got scared. Leroy then charged a galactic beam and successfully shot the beam. Greth and two others had died from the blast, leaving only two of them. Then the two fired a bunch of energy blasts.

Leroy had dodged most of them but some of them hit him. Then the duo seperated. One had attacked me from the back and the other attacked me from the front. Leroy blocked most of the attacks. They fired ki blasts, luckily Leroy was able to dodge the attack. "Hey fellas", Leroy called out, "I haven't even used my full power". Leroy began powering up to his full potential. He shot five energy balls to each of them. He went up to one of them. He punched him, kicked him, and fired a ki blast at him. Then the raider had died.

" Nooo! Niko! How dare you! You will now fall at the hands of me, Nokru" this 'Nokru' had said. "Look man, I will not fall. You will be the one to reach the ground first ", Leroy replied. Leroy then came up to him and hit Nokru with his right elbow. Nokru fell to the floor. "Told you", Leroy said confidently. While Nokru was trying to get back up and fight, Leroy threw an energy wave. The wave shot right his head. Nokru died.
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Re: Kidnappers!

Post by Leroy on Fri Feb 11, 2011 10:11 pm

Can someone grade this already??
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Re: Kidnappers!

Post by Gokin on Sat Feb 19, 2011 4:00 pm

Good job.

Reward: 3,000 PL
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Re: Kidnappers!

Post by Leroy on Sun Feb 20, 2011 12:06 am

I feel kind of over-powered. Plus I'm supposed to gain 10k of PL for joining DBRP right?
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Post by Gokin on Sun Feb 20, 2011 5:16 pm

You fell over-powered? Why?

And yeah, but I think Cello just added it.
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Re: Kidnappers!

Post by Leroy on Sun Feb 20, 2011 10:19 pm

No, I feel over-powered. Well because, now my PL is totally OVER 9000!!!! Also, in the event, I have the highest PL. Besides you atleast
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Post by Gokin on Tue Feb 22, 2011 8:44 am

lol, I'm not there, I'm just playing the character Nail.
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Post by Leroy on Wed Feb 23, 2011 4:29 pm

Ahhh. I see. That just makes me feel even more stronger in that place.
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