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a hero is born (earth)

Post by Shargon on Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:20 pm

a hero is born
cojin was just flying around the sky but then he saw a person destroying a city he went down there and he knew this person could not be normal so he then went to the person at super speed then punched and kicked him a bunch of times but each hit was dodged very easy by the person and he said "hmm?...is that all you got i thought saiyans are strong im a android if you cannot tell and im here to destroy the whole planet for my creator" cojin then went to him super speed again and now his speed was alot faster but his punches are weaker but the android still dodged all of them and he then grabed cojin by the neck and said "sigh, I thought I, would of had some fun I, guess not" he then threw cojin in the air and then went up and smashed him into the ground and said "weakling, you know you really need to, train alot more if you think you can defeat me" cojins eyes turn crimson red and his energy increased alot and said "thats, it im not weak AND ILL SHOW YOU IM NOT!" he then went super fast towards the android his speed was insane and all his punches hit him he then punched the android in the gut then knocked him into a building and he was stuck in it he then charged a star buster and said "you, see im not weak now time for you to die" he then fired the star buster at the android destroying the building and all that was left of the android was his head and it said "but how...my creator will avenge me just wait...and see..." cojin then pointed his hand at the androids head and charged a energy wave and before he fired it to destroy the head he said "shut up, ill kill your creator and any other androids he made" he then fired the energy wave at the head blowing it up he then went into the sky and went away from the city


Last edited by nicka209 on Thu Nov 11, 2010 12:51 am; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : just wanted to fix the spelling error when the android said his creator would avenge him)
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Re: a hero is born (earth)

Post by Cleric on Thu Nov 11, 2010 12:25 am

Alright, I'll let this slip one last time, but next time you must start using periods. It gets sloppy when you dont, and makes one long run-on sentence. And please, capitalize your I's when they're alone.

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